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A few things I noticed:
1. You need to erase around the edges of the ships. Black boxes look stupid.
2. Getting hit by enemy fire didn't seem to do anything.
3. The music was a bit annoying.

I'm guessing this is your first game, perhaps even your first Flash (excuse me if I'm wrong). Still, it shows potential. Just spend some more time polishing up and you can probably make some fun stuff! You might also want to make something a bit more original but hey, what is original nowadays?

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Score: 7

"Decent, but I think it needs some tightening."

submission: Ready for Impact

date: June 12, 2009

I'm not sure what you used to record this, but it sounds as if someone held up a USB microphone when you played - the quality isn't that great. As for the music itself, I like the unconventional riff the song is based on. At some points it sounds like the instrumentation gets a bit off for a beat or two, hence why I think it needs some tightening. Just keep at it. You definitely have potential! Great work.

June 15, 2009

Author's Response:

Thanks for your opinion. You're right we did kind of mess up a bit :p. Basically, this song was for our H.S.' : "Talent Show". So we rushed a little and we messed up a few times :p. As for the quality of our mic, blame our school lol. But believe me, at our school we sounded a little worse than this because the school wouldn't let us do a sound check. :p

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Score: 8

"Sweet riff."

submission: Kull

date: June 12, 2009

Reminiscent of some of the driving guitar riffs by Skid Row, I think if this was incorporated into a full song you'd definitely have something going for you. Nice job!

July 9, 2009